14 November 2005

“Are you all right?”

I took out my left earpiece and turned to her.

She repeated for me: “Are you all right?”

The question was not completely serious. She was smiling behind her face.

“Yes, yes, I'm fine.”

She drove away.

I had fallen under a tree on a street corner. I had been felled by the power of Brahms. It was obvious I was not fine. I was in a state of ecstasy. I was magnificently beast. She was not beast. She interrupted me. At least she was hot.

Next time I'll do it in the forest.

11 Comments:

At November 14, 2005 10:18 p.m., Anonymous Anonymous said...

That was really stupid.

 
At November 16, 2005 10:46 p.m., Anonymous Anonymous said...

...I'm not sure I understand.

 
At November 17, 2005 2:19 p.m., Anonymous Anonymous said...

Your not incredibly good at anything,you are socially lacking,so you say you are better than everyone to keep an identity.


UUUUUUUUUUU SUCK.

 
At November 17, 2005 10:14 p.m., Anonymous Anonymous said...

hahahahaha! I know you but you don't know who I am :)
It's very.....Steven...

 
At November 18, 2005 3:28 p.m., Blogger Lee said...

Wow, no wonder you don't like poetry. You suck at it.

Of course, you'll deny that it had any poetic nature and you'll say that everything you had to say was said.

But that's not true, because this can be juxtaposed with your life. Are you okay? You just love math so much. and you'll only reply, "Yeah, I'm okay." but you'll be thinking on how much they're missing out. And you'll pity them, as a "beast" pities those who are not "beast."

 
At November 18, 2005 9:31 p.m., Blogger carpo said...

Thanks for that Rosanna.

 
At November 18, 2005 9:33 p.m., Blogger carpo said...

It was meant to represent my life, fool.

Beasts do not pity.

The only value in your comment is in its confidence.

 
At November 18, 2005 9:40 p.m., Blogger Lee said...

Hah. Beasts do pity, especially themselves, when they cannot get laid.

 
At November 19, 2005 3:52 p.m., Anonymous Anonymous said...

It must Suck to need a month to come up with that.
-"But steven was busy"
-"no he wasnt,he had Soccer,conversations with himself"
-"but doesnt that qualify?"
-"does it matter"
-"Yea it does,i want to know if hes an idiot."
"Wow your bored"
-"Exuse me i think its a fair question"
-"maybe the lesser him makes him ok with all of you,with makes him socailly active"
-"was that an answer,or an emotional let-down"
"You asked for an answer to your question"
"someone is in a bad mood"
"my mood:everything"
"do you even know what you just said?"
End of skit one, Boys
Next week:My response
"Steven Karp is going to make a great comedy"
"I know,I know."

 
At November 21, 2005 10:16 p.m., Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hey, wait, multiple "me" wouldn't have an apostrophe.

Way to fail at english.

 
At November 21, 2005 10:30 p.m., Blogger carpo said...

Obviously I'm right, the apostrophe is to distinguish that the "s" is plural so it would not look awkward like "Mes", check any style guide.

 

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